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cherydactyl ([personal profile] cherydactyl) wrote2005-08-01 11:39 pm
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Haiku

time and space in vacuum
meditate on stillness past
toys and laundry call

Edit:
How about this instead:

time and space are lost
meditate on stillness past
toys and laundry call
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[identity profile] sorcycat.livejournal.com 2005-08-03 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Doesn't the first line have 6 syllables?
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[identity profile] cherydactyl.livejournal.com 2005-08-03 11:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Aha! Somebody is paying attention... ;-p
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