Haiku

Aug. 1st, 2005 11:39 pm
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time and space in vacuum
meditate on stillness past
toys and laundry call

Edit:
How about this instead:


time and space are lost
meditate on stillness past
toys and laundry call

Date: 2005-08-03 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sorcycat.livejournal.com
Doesn't the first line have 6 syllables?

Date: 2005-08-03 11:32 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] cherydactyl.livejournal.com
Aha! Somebody is paying attention... ;-p

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